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As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Whether
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 should allocate a part of their time to studying in a foreign country remains controversial. I disagree with the idea of semester abroad programs
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 financial reasons and other available viable ways,
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 as using
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 to acquire
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language
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 and cultural knowledge.
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, conducting a part of the curriculum overseas is impractical in terms of finance. It undoubtedly leads to the rise in tuition fees which, in turn, puts more burdens on parents, especially those with decent incomes. Some advocates argue that in some countries the tuition is subsidized [artly by governments, so parents are not responsible for the entire increase.
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, given that the state budget is limited, if governments choose a more expensive option for education, it means that the share for other essential areas
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 as healthcare, welfare or infrastructure
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 likely to be reduced, indirectly affecting the well-being of a nation.
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,
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 can be utilized to explore a culture and acquire a
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. Some
people
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 might think that relocating to a country where
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 speak the
students
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' target
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 can help improve their speaking skills and confidence because
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 have opportunities to engage in real-life conversations with locals.
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, many recently developed internet platforms
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 as Cambly, allow
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 to connect with
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 from every corner of the world and practice
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 at a much more affordable price.
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, documentary programs from channels
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 as Nat Geo or Discovery with state-of-the-art filming techniques offer viewers, at almost no cost, vivid experiences about the life of
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 all over the world. In conclusion, I contend that forcing
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 to move to a foreign country just to learn about its culture and
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 creates more stress over monetary issues for both parents and governments.
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, with the advancement of
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, other equally effective measures are available at a far lower cost. Educators should encourage
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 to take advantage of advanced
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 to support their studies and enhance their performance.
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