The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014
The bar chart illustrates how
the
China, USA, Germany, UK, Singapore, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia, and Taiwan Correct article usage
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that
spent their Correct pronoun usage
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money
on travelling in 2014.
Overall
, China took the
first place in the expending Correct article usage
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money
on travelling among all countries
in that year. Although
Taiwan was in the
10th place among them all.
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According to
the chart in 2014 the
China Correct article usage
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was
spent 110 Unnecessary verb
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billion
USD
, which was the highest compared to the other countries
. Both USA and Germany took 2nd and 3rd places in the list, which were above 85 billion
USD
. And UK
spent too much Correct article usage
the UK
money
in that year on travelling, which was 55 billion
USD
. While
the other countries
didn't
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spent
too much Change the verb form
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money
on travelling, which
seized 5th to 10th places, Correct pronoun usage
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Singapore, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia, and Taiwan. Those Remove the comma
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countries
only spent around 10 to 25 billion
USD
on travelling in 2014.Submitted by bashdar.hussen on
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