Some people say that the government should invest in trains and subway system to prevent traffic congestion in large cities. Others, however, think it should build wider roads. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some argue that traffic jams can be avoided by improving the trains and

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system, others think that the government should improve the road infrastructure

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having large

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promotes a smooth flow of vehicles, I believe that it is better to spend on trains and

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projects because they provide affordable transport modes for residents and they are environmentally sustainable. On the one hand, spending money on the construction of bigger routes allows

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to drive freely without congestion. Investing in

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phenomenon will mean people will be able to travel to work with less traffic compared to narrow

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that are usually full of angry drivers.

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, motorways with 8 lanes spread automobiles around,

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, drivers can drive at a speed limit without having to slow down because of the car in front of them.

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reason, many opine to the idea of making wider

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, investing in better public transport services in big cities reduce the risks of pollution caused by private vehicles. If the government devote money to improving railway and

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transportation systems,

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there will be fewer citizens driving their

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for work.

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, pollution rates in the air are minimised.

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, commuting in the city is cheaper than driving private vehicles.

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, employees commuting to the city for work on the

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or train spend about $10 two-ways,

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, someone driving spends roughly about $25 per day inclusive of

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fee.

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, I believe that

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more money should be transferred to the construction of railways rather than spending

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.

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will stop more

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for better subways and train stations. In conclusion,

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some believe big

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lead to less traffic, yet others think trains and subways should be used, I think the latter has more benefits.