the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits
The bar chart illustrates the data on the outcome of consuming and drinking
coffee
and tea in 5 cities in Australia, namely Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide and Use synonyms
Hobart
.
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Overall
, Linking Words
according to
results, in the Linking Words
last
4 weeks, the majority of Australian citizens preferred going to a café for Linking Words
coffee
or tea, particularly in Use synonyms
Melbourne
and Use synonyms
Hobart
. Meanwhile, the number of people who bought fresh Use synonyms
coffee
was less than those who bought instant Use synonyms
coffee
.
Just over 60% of locals in Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
and Use synonyms
Hobart
went to a café for a cup of Use synonyms
coffee
or tea in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks, compared to around half of Adelaide citizens.
Instant Linking Words
coffee
was mostly bought in Brisbane and Use synonyms
Hobart
, accounting for more than half of residents, Use synonyms
while
less than 50% of citizens from Linking Words
Sydney
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
did.
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On the other hand
, the least favourite habit in every city is buying fresh Linking Words
coffee
. Use synonyms
Sydney
experienced the largest portion which was around 44%, nearly 42% in Use synonyms
Melbourne
and less than 35% in Brisban.Use synonyms
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