The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps show the future development which will be made around Norbiton industrial area.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there will be a lot of changes on both sides of the
river
. All the factories will be replaced by new buildings and new facilities, which will be constructed for residential, educational, and commercial purposes. Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the most noticeable alteration is the removal of the factories and the addition of the housing units and several facilities in its space, completely transforming the site into a residential area.
Moreover
, the road is expanded to the north
site
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side
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across the
river
, reaching
to
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the housing unit near the farmland.
In addition
, the factories near the roundabout are displaced by shops and a medical
center
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. On the southeast side of the
river
, a school is added near the playground which is newly erected and the residential area. The farmland which is beyond the
river
remains but the size is reduced to make space for the new housing site and road.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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