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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow their customs and behaviour. Cthers disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss buth these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expcricnce. Write at least 250 words

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Culture
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 and customs help
people
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 to keep a connection with their
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 and the
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 is represented by their
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 and traditions. Some
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 argue that
tourists
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 to other countries should follow their
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 and customs.
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, some
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 believe that the host
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 should welcome
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 with their cultural differences. In my opinion, the host
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 should welcome
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 with their cultural differences.
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 it has some drawbacks.
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 with,
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 often are afraid and do not promote other
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 in their
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 because they believe that it can slowly change their
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 and in the future, the upcoming generation, will probably
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not have knowledge and understanding of their
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.
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, it can cause a major change in
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's food preferences because of the introduction of new food items. Some
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also
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 believe that it can slowly change their national language into some other language. It can
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 affect their traditional clothing styles.
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, in Pakistan, some
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 wear Western clothing and they feel inferior whenever they wear their traditional clothing. Probing ahead, if the host
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 welcomes
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 with their
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 can promote tourism and it can play a huge role in the economy's growth. As many countries are competing to attract more and more
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 by building new infrastructure and hotels.
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, there will be a diversity in
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 and
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 will get exposed to new
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 and eventually it can broaden their knowledge.
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, Finland is a
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 which has a huge number of lakes and northern lights. Its economy depends heavily upon tourism making Finland one of the best places to live in.
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,
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 are afraid of losing their
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 and customs because of the exposure of other
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's
cultures
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 but welcoming them with their
cultures
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 promotes tourism and it can play a major role in the growth of the economy.
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