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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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It is believed by many individuals that the main goal of higher
education
 get highly paid jobs and makes them able to secure their future .
on the other hand
 other's opinion is ,it's a huge step towards civilisation. it's indeed right that university students become more skilful , marketable and competitive employees who are perfect for significant jobs.
In addition
 through jobs, they make sure their future
secure
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 and spend a lavish life.
thus
 job perspective is essential for spending life.
Although
 through university
education
, youngsters learn many more professional tactics, the same platform guides them on how to become civilised.
firstly
 when the students live in hostels and in halls away from their families, they meet new friends and they find practical ways to generate income for fulfilling their needs.
Further
 more The learners get knowledge about different aspects of life , and they experience human behaviours.
This
education
 system works on pupils' cognitive programs more over it creates a broad spectrum of thoughts among adults which is highly beneficial for our society. In a nutshell, in my ,opinion is that the initial purpose of a university
education
 is , to get a better job . We are living in an electronic age and we need highly professional and civilised people to forcompete the other challenging countries.
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