Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Impacts of doing

sports

on physical and mental well-being are manifold.

Therefore

, governments should provide sufficient

facilities

for their people

as well as

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them to do

such

activities. Governments’ attention to

sports

could be judged by their countries’ success rate in international competitions.

However

,

this

may not be a good standard

due to

its shortcomings in including ordinary people. Professional athletes could set a great example for all of us in terms of improving our physical shape and doing

sports

more often. Younger generations

in particular

are often selecting a role model and imitating his or her actions. So If they pick a footballer,

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NBA player or even a boxer as their superhero, they have a better chance to be active and healthy just like them.

Moreover

, it will simply lower the chances of them doing harmful habits like smoking or doing drugs. In

this

manner, paying attention to professional

sports

could not only bring silverware but can it

also

improve public health. In the past, regular workout and a healthy

life-style

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was

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sufficient for a talented athlete to

became

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successful in his or her field. But nowadays, it is necessary to invest a huge amount of money

on

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specialized

facilities

and modern technologies in order to win anything in an international competition in

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to public

sports

complexes that can

built

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with multiple times lesser money.

Therefore

, many experts believe that investment in public

facilities

,

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should take precedence over spending

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amount of finance in exclusive training camps for professionals. In conclusion ,

while

investing in professional

sports

could improve general health by setting a good example for

population

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, governments shouldn’t spend their total

sport’s

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budget on it.

Cause

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increasing public

sport

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facilities

is a fundamental requirement to improve public health.