More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern medicine, obesity is a major risk factor for many chronic diseases

such

as diabetes, cardiac arrest, liver dysfunction, and kidney disease. Unfortunately, people are becoming overweight increasingly. Sugar

craving

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and eating junk

food

are some of the probable causes of

this

situation. Health organizations have advertised against these false habits for a long time, but until now, their attempts have been unsuccessful. Some experts

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believe that government could restrain

this

problem by reevaluating

food

prices based on their nutritional value. The more beneficial

foods

get lower price tags in

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to fattening ones. In

this

way, financial value will

be add

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to their health benefits. Fast

foods

are places where you can find chip, quick, tasty and pretty unhealthy meal options. Fast

food

chains are increasingly growing all around the world and altering various

food

cultures in an unhealthy way. Their impact on society

are

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far reaching

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and

require

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urgent attention. Convincing the owners of

such

restaurants to raise

up

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their prices is a sensible solution. In

this

way,

these kind

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of

foods

will become less appealing

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the restaurant owners wouldn’t face

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crisis.

On the other hand

, many experts believe that

food

pricing is an extremely sensitive area and a simple mistake could lead to dangerous conditions

,

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because

food

is a primary human need and poor people could face huge problems

by

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any inflation in the

food

market.

Moreover

, governmental interruption

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could intimidate

free

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economy and freedom of people’s choices. In conclusion,

while

increasing the prices of junk

foods

offers potential benefits in order to

popularizing

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high-nutritional

foods

, it

also

presents significant challenges in terms of restraining freedom of

choices

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.