You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter •tell them when you will be arriving and leaving • explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost • ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to book a weekend in your beautiful hotel. My mother has,

at the end

of September, her 50th birthday, so I am planning to spend a weekend with the whole family.

For

this

reason, I would like to reserve three rooms from Friday 8 to Sunday 10 September. To be specific, we are eight people (six adults and two children), and we need two double

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and a family room.

Furthermore

, if it is possible, we would like to have breakfast and dinner in your hotel. Could you please inform me how much does it cost?

Although

your hotel is located in a huge green area, I did not find much information on

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the internet

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internet

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about some activities that we can do with children in the area. Could you please suggest

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any activity or nice place to visit? Thank you in advance for your help. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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