You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter in order to complain about the product of your company, which I bought

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apply

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on your website and I recently received it. the product is iPhone 5 and when I opened the box,

then

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found out that it did not come with any charger cable, which

this

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supposed to have a

couple

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cables in a

package

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Accordingly

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, It makes me dissatisfied, because

this

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iPhone 5 will be provided to my younger sister tomorrow as a gift.

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, the delivery was so fast, because I press an order yesterday and already received it, but I found a

package

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was opened might

due to

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the delivery process.

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, I would be grateful if you can replace the new

package

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for me, and I personally suggest that you should double-wrap the

package

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before sending it. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Sincerely, Cuttareeya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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157 words

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