Wealth and material belonging often measure the success that a person has. Do you think wealth is best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

There is no doubt, money and material considered

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will debate why I disagree with

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. To commence with , there is not a single method to calculate the

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always consist

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efforts and personal goal in

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life

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For example

, an extremely wealthy

person

that inherits all his fortune has not done anything to achieve

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socially privileged position.

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case,material belonging should not indicate how successful

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person

is.

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, wealth would only be a defining factor for those who work hard and managed to successfully increase their earnings .

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this

topic

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how much dedication and effort someone can put into daily activities

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pursuing their personal goals .

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occurs

because individual achievements are the best method to calculate

success

.

For instance

, when a student who does not have enough

saving

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to cover university expenses is awarded a full scholarship. It is obvious

this

person

achieved a successful accomplishment .

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yourself

youself

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yourself

to work hard

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fulfil dreams and to make a successful

person

In conclusion,

it is clear that

wealth and material belonging cannot

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success

in

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someone

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life

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only depend on hard work in

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achieve

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their goals