The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton and its future remodelling plan.
Overall
, the factory located on the south of the river
will be reconstructed into a housing area with a wide range of infrastructure for daily activities. In contrast
with , the nowadays map, the farmland area from the north of the river
will be restricted and the housing segment is planned to construct a bridge to cross the river
.
Firstly
, we can see that currently from the south of the river
located only factories and from farmland it separates only the river
.
Secondly
, from the future plan ,map it is obvious that all factory areas will be remodelled to the housing which also
will cross the river
by bridge and locate partially on the north of the river
, restricting the farmland segment nearly by half. On the south side of the ,
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apply
river
the housing will have well-developed
infrastructure with a playground and school located to the east of the town and a medical centre to the southeast of the centre of the housing. There Add an article
a well-developed
the well-developed
also
will be shops located southwest of the centre of the housing.Submitted by mamik199316 on
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