The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton and its future remodelling plan.
Overall
, the factory located on the south of the Linking Words
river
will be reconstructed into a housing area with a wide range of infrastructure for daily activities. Use synonyms
In contrast
with , the nowadays map, the farmland area from the north of the Linking Words
river
will be restricted and the housing segment is planned to construct a bridge to cross the Use synonyms
river
.
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Firstly
, we can see that currently from the south of the Linking Words
river
located only factories and from farmland it separates only the Use synonyms
river
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, from the future plan ,map it is obvious that all factory areas will be remodelled to the housing which Linking Words
also
will cross the Linking Words
river
by bridge and locate partially on the north of the Use synonyms
river
, restricting the farmland segment nearly by half. On the south side of the Use synonyms
,
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apply
river
the housing will have Use synonyms
well-developed
infrastructure with a playground and school located to the east of the town and a medical centre to the southeast of the centre of the housing. There Add an article
a well-developed
the well-developed
also
will be shops located southwest of the centre of the housing.Linking Words
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