“By definition, charity is generosity in offering money, food, and help to the needy. To some people, such kindness should be boundless, others argue for a limit to it.” Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

Clearly, charity is a beneficial
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and for society, I
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for charities each
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, and I am going to
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both views today. the majority of people like to
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as clothes, money, and electricities, and
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kindness and sympathy
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in our day, feelings, and
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in many ways.
on the other hand
,
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other people all your money and
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with your own life is not a wise direction, it could
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you with
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a bad
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your future.
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, helping other people will help you in many categories , the better
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is to
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your donations not just subconsciously but
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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