TASK 1: The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
For the time being, everyone, especially the elders has an immense carefulness to health and medical care so as to prolong their life expectancies. We are able to start using some simple plans, like having a suitable diet and playing sports frequently in our spare time. The office worker ought to take advantage of cycling
instead
of motorbikes to do workouts and protect the environment. Blue-collar workers who do manual labor
jobs should have a high-quality restChange the spelling
labour
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