Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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communication
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many
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but
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language is the best
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to express anyone's feelings .
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spoken and written both have their own
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in
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. I think talking face to face is
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great
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to
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with
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others
rather than
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writing
. First of all, we speak with lots of emotions . One line can be expressed
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many
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like emotionally or
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happily
.
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why communicating with language helps us to express our emotions properly .
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, If someone is sad
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we can get it by the
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of speaking and
also
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by the tone of the voice .
secondly
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, the quality of being
extroverts
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helps us in different
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of life . In many Interviews speaking provide lots of chances to secure a good job.
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, introverts are much
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in written
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which is a bad quality for them .
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by writing no one can express how they are feelings . miscommunication can
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take place .
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, bye can be used as
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and
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. If anyone
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not get the emotion
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some
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problem can
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place . In conclusion , both
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has several advantages but spoken has more pros than written to expressing feelings properly .
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