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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

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In many countries, the number of
crimes
 is increasing, and
criminals
 are becoming more ruthless, but the current laws are getting stronger, yet
criminals
 are avoiding these laws, they are not following the law. In Uzbekistan, there are violations of the rules,
such
 as abusing a child and going to someone's house
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violations on the road cause accidents, so we should be as careful as possible on the roads Minor
offenses
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 may be fined, but murder and similar serious
offenses
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 are likely to carry prison terms. Many
people
 commit
crimes
 when they are under stress or unconsciously,
while
 some
people
 commit
crimes
 intentionally or unintentionally. In my opinion,
people
 should fight in advance so that they do not commit
such
crimes
 Because many
people
 may not know the laws and regulations,
therefore
 many
crimes
 may occur in many countries Nowadays, most
of
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people
 are committing
such
 violations on the internet, and most of them are hidden,
for example
, they can withdraw your money through the internet, or they can take your social media accounts, so they are warned by the government, and many countries have tried to stop these
crimes
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Such
 precautions should
also
 be taken by local residents, they should not give out any passwords, codes or phone numbers to anyone,
otherwise
 your money or accounts on your card may be stolen.
Criminals
 are becoming very brutal and these
criminals
 should be given very severe punishments and
people
 should be warned about these
crimes
 and their punishments.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • crime rate
  • violent crimes
  • socioeconomic factors
  • law enforcement
  • technology
  • education
  • employment
  • drug abuse
  • alcohol abuse
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • effectiveness
  • investing
  • job creation
  • social support
  • community engagement
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