The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The table illustrates the proportion of global
market
share of 7 different cell phone corporations between 2005 and 2006. In the general overview, it is clear that
Nokia was the highest popular company, whilst BenQ Mobile remained the lowest in the field among
both years.
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According to
the upward trends, there contained 3 firms of phone sellers that increasing in a year. Nokia reached the apex of the market
, starting with 32.5 percent
to 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
by 2006. Change the spelling
per cent
While
Motorola significantly rose around 4 percent
, Sony Ericsson gradually climbed only 1 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
from 6.3 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
to 7.4 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, Motorola shipped and replaced the second place in the market
, instead
of other companies.
In contrast
, there were 4 companies that
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apply
the
percentage of Correct article usage
whose
market
share dropped over a year period. Interestingly, both Samsung and L.G. firms slightly decreased approximately less than 1 percent
, 0.9 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and 0.4 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, BenQ Mobile plummeted around 2.5 percent
which Change the spelling
per cent
almost
parallel number with other corporations that Add a missing verb
is almost
fallen
by 2 Add the auxiliary verb
fell
have fallen
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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