You have just read a newspaper article with incorrect information. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter - Report the error to the editor - Correct the error in the article - Suggest the newspaper what to do with it.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to misleading information printed in your 5th August 2023 newspaper edition. I, Harsh, read your newspaper every day. It is a well-known
as well as
, trusted newspaper in our city.
Although
, yesterday when I was reading headlines, I came across one title, which was describe the new traffic policy announced by the government of Gujarat.
Additionally
,
according to
the
,
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the penalties are increased by more than half a percentage.
However
, the report was wrong, it is only a 10% increase compared to the past figure.
Moreover
, the popularity of your renowned publication is huge for that reason, it might create chaos among residents.
Furthermore
, you can verify
this
data through the city council, as my father works as a clerk in the town council,and I get confirmation from him.
Also
, if you may publish
this
article again with the correct info? So, it will not only be beneficial for residents but
also
, the publication house will gain people's trust. Looking forward to seeing prompt action. Yours faithfully, Harsh Trivedi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
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