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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the united states by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the united states by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables illustrate how the number of
internation
Correct your spelling
international
students
 has changed between 2002 and 2003 in
Canada
 and the United States, specifying the country of origin.
Overall
, it can be argued that the USA is the country with more foreign
students
, even if between 2002 and 2003 the number of international
students
 in
Canada
 has grown consistently. Focusing on details, the total number of
students
 in the USA during the studied period was almost 600 thousand,
while
 in
Canada
 was not even 80 thousand.
Nevertheless
, the totality of
students
 in
Canada
increase
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increased
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 by 17%, whilst in the USA went up only by 2% from 2002 to 2003. In
addiction
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addition
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 to
this
, the
quantity
Change the quantifier
number
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 of
students
 from China grew sharply from 2002 to 2003
in
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apply
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Canada
, as a matter of
fact
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,fact
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 they passed from 5,400 to 7,850
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 means
a
Correct article usage
apply
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45%.
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