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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the united states by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the united states by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables illustrate how the number of
internation
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international
students
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 has changed between 2002 and 2003 in
Canada
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 and the United States, specifying the country of origin.
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, it can be argued that the USA is the country with more foreign
students
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, even if between 2002 and 2003 the number of international
students
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 in
Canada
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 has grown consistently. Focusing on details, the total number of
students
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 in the USA during the studied period was almost 600 thousand,
while
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 in
Canada
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 was not even 80 thousand.
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, the totality of
students
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 in
Canada
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increase
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 by 17%, whilst in the USA went up only by 2% from 2002 to 2003. In
addiction
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addition
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 to
this
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, the
quantity
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number
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 of
students
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 from China grew sharply from 2002 to 2003
in
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apply
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Canada
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, as a matter of
fact
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 they passed from 5,400 to 7,850
that
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which
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 means
a
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apply
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45%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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