The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive decelopment while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. other hand,

Travelling abroad is an optimum choice for many individuals on their holidays.

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low-cost

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offer fair prices for poor people, it seems to me that increasing the

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of

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aeroplanes

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will come with some damage to the

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. Low-cost

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provide an affordable price for individuals who want to travel, which means that not only rich people can visit overseas countries but

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the poor can benefit from the opportunity. Poor people now have a chance to travel somewhere exotic and increase their job options.

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residents were searching a high-wage work, so

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, low-cost

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allow them to travel to Taiwan or other Asian nations to obtain their dream job.

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a lower

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threshold of airline tickets provides individuals with the opportunity to find a job without borders. The caveat is that

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policy increases the

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of aeroplanes, which inevitably damages the

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. The disadvantage of low-cost

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is that the fuel consumption by aircraft increases with the accompanying larger

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of planes.

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affordable

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benefit society, it does raise the emissions that come with the aircraft. Technically, each aeroplane’s fuel consumption spreads to the ocean during the flight, which means the ocean’s surface is permeated with waste.

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impacts the ocean species living under pollution, which increases their mortality rates and

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faces grave extinction. If the

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of aircraft proliferates, the damage to the

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will be an unsurmountable problem. In conclusion, despite the low-cost

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benefit society, the negative effects on the

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are the main aspect that we need to care about. I believe that the disadvantage

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the advantage in

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situation.