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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps show how Southwest Airport will change after redevelopment.
Overall
, it will experience significant transformations with the most noticeable changes being the increase in the number of gates and the addition of amenities
such
 as retail shops, an ATM and a car hire service.
While
 the arrival and departure doors will remain unchanged,  the number of doors will be increased from 2 to 4. In the departure hall, the check-in counter will be relocated from the left to the right to make way for the addition of a backdrop area and the relocation of the coffee shop. The arrivals section will see the addition of a café,
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 ATM and it will be extended to make room for a car hire service located right next to the arrival entrance. There will be no changes in security and passport control. Retail shops will be erected after security passport control for departures. The most noticeable change will be the replacement of a walkway with a sky train and the number of gates will be increased from 8 to 18 to enhance the airport's capacity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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