The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1900s. Summarise the informaion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the fundamental causes of worldwide
land
degradation, and the given table shows how these reasons affected three places of the globe in the 1990s.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the fundamental factors of worldwide land
degradation were because of over-grazing and deforestation. Meanwhile, the land
in Europe was the highest area affected by the causes.
Looking at the information in more detail, 35% and 30% of the reasons why land
degraded were over-grazing and deforestation respectively. Then
followed by over-cultivation at 28%. The last
reason was because of the other causes.
There was 23% of total land
degraded in Europe, and the main cause was deforestation (9.8%). 11.3% of land
in Oceania was degraded by over-grazing. Whereas
, 3.3% of land
degraded in North America was because of over-cultivation.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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