Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nothing can fix the fact that

people

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's actions and opinions are controlled by the mass

media

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. Many have made it a habit to watch the

news

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in their free time to know what is going on in the world than to watch movies.

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is everywhere,

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we are driving to work or school, they sound through the radio. There are

people

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who, when they come home after a hard day, are used to watching all the

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of the world,

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through applications on their phones, whether they are true or not. They have already entered our daily routine and have a certain influence

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our lives. An example is the recent

news

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about multiple multi-magnitude earthquakes in the Turkish region, which caused great fear among the

people

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of most countries. Listening to the

news

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every day penetrates the unconscious mind and affects

people

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's choices,

behaviors

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and opinions without them realizing it. A Barbie movie was recently released, in which the actors were dressed in pink. The

news

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began to show how much money

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film made in just a few days of viewing, associating it with excerpts. After a few days,

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began to change into pink en masse.

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, there are several reasons, following which we can say with certainty that the

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will never be able to completely control

people

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and their actions. From my point of view, they have a partial influence as we come across them very often, but there are

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like me , who prefer to watch movies or short videos than

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, each person has his own opinion, which is difficult to change.

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, there is a group of

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who do not have the time or interest to follow the

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, there is a third group who do not listen to the

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while

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it is being broadcast on TV or radio.

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, it should be noted that recently we can often observe fake

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, which

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almost 70-80% of all

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, the death of celebrities who turn out to be alive a few days later.

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, more of us do not believe the

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even

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watch it daily. In conclusion, the

media

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may have an effect on

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, but it cannot completely control them. it

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depends on the capabilities of each. Not everyone will be able to fully comply

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since not everyone has the same budget. If the

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reports that it is good for health to eat 1 egg, 200 grams of meat, white bread, 200

milliliters

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of milk, and so on, not everyone will be able to buy it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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441 words

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