Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nothing can fix the fact that
people
's actions and opinions are controlled by the mass
media
. Many have made it a habit to watch the
news
in their free time to know what is going on in the world than to watch movies.
News
is everywhere,
while
we are driving to work or school, they sound through the radio. There are
people
who, when they come home after a hard day, are used to watching all the
news
of the world,
also
through applications on their phones, whether they are true or not. They have already entered our daily routine and have a certain influence
in
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our lives. An example is the recent
news
about multiple multi-magnitude earthquakes in the Turkish region, which caused great fear among the
people
of most countries. Listening to the
news
every day penetrates the unconscious mind and affects
people
's choices,
behaviors
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and opinions without them realizing it. A Barbie movie was recently released, in which the actors were dressed in pink. The
news
began to show how much money
this
film made in just a few days of viewing, associating it with excerpts. After a few days,
people
began to change into pink en masse.
On the other hand
, there are several reasons, following which we can say with certainty that the
media
will never be able to completely control
people
and their actions. From my point of view, they have a partial influence as we come across them very often, but there are
people
like me , who prefer to watch movies or short videos than
news
.
Firstly
, each person has his own opinion, which is difficult to change.
Secondly
, there is a group of
people
who do not have the time or interest to follow the
news
.
Thirdly
, there is a third group who do not listen to the
news
,
while
it is being broadcast on TV or radio.
In addition
, it should be noted that recently we can often observe fake
news
, which
occupy
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almost 70-80% of all
news
For example
, the death of celebrities who turn out to be alive a few days later.
Therefore
, more of us do not believe the
news
even
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watch it daily. In conclusion, the
media
may have an effect on
people
, but it cannot completely control them.  it
also
depends on the capabilities of each.  Not everyone will be able to fully comply
,
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since not everyone has the same budget.  If the
media
reports that it is good for health to eat 1 egg, 200 grams of meat, white bread, 200
milliliters
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of milk, and so on, not everyone will be able to buy it.
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