Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nothing can fix the fact that
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's actions and opinions are controlled by the mass
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. Many have made it a habit to watch the
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in their free time to know what is going on in the world than to watch movies.
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is everywhere,
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we are driving to work or school, they sound through the radio. There are
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who, when they come home after a hard day, are used to watching all the
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of the world,
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through applications on their phones, whether they are true or not. They have already entered our daily routine and have a certain influence
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our lives. An example is the recent
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about multiple multi-magnitude earthquakes in the Turkish region, which caused great fear among the
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of most countries. Listening to the
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every day penetrates the unconscious mind and affects
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's choices,
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and opinions without them realizing it. A Barbie movie was recently released, in which the actors were dressed in pink. The
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began to show how much money
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film made in just a few days of viewing, associating it with excerpts. After a few days,
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began to change into pink en masse.
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, there are several reasons, following which we can say with certainty that the
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will never be able to completely control
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and their actions. From my point of view, they have a partial influence as we come across them very often, but there are
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like me , who prefer to watch movies or short videos than
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.
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, each person has his own opinion, which is difficult to change.
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, there is a group of
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who do not have the time or interest to follow the
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.
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, there is a third group who do not listen to the
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,
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it is being broadcast on TV or radio.
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, it should be noted that recently we can often observe fake
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, which
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almost 70-80% of all
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, the death of celebrities who turn out to be alive a few days later.
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, more of us do not believe the
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watch it daily. In conclusion, the
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may have an effect on
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, but it cannot completely control them.  it
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depends on the capabilities of each.  Not everyone will be able to fully comply
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since not everyone has the same budget.  If the
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reports that it is good for health to eat 1 egg, 200 grams of meat, white bread, 200
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of milk, and so on, not everyone will be able to buy it.
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