The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart presents from the former to the future of finances for a small authority in New Zealand.
Overall
, the
rates
of
revenue
and user charges are plummeting around and above 2 thousand
million
dollars
. Unlike, borrowings and grants and subsidies which are predicted to go steadily from 500 to 1000
million
dollars
.
Rates
revenue
spiked high in 2013, moving straight upwards
till
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2 thousand
million
dollars
in 2022.
Similarly
, user charges start from a much lower place at 1000
million
dollars
in 2012, going parallel in the future with
rates
revenue
. Borrowings have a bumpy journey ahead
with
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reaching up to around 1500
million
dollars
in 2020
,
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and dipping under
a
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1000
million
dollars
in 2021, plateauing since. Meanwhile, grants and subsidies experiences
its
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greatest increase in 2016, with a gradual decrease and
finally
steady at 500
million
dollars
.
Rates
revenue
and user charges are pretty straightforward compared to borrowings. They are
also
the
one
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ones
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getting an increase than the others. The lowest of them all grants and subsidies is going to be steady.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, revenue, million, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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