History tells that people have often thought about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society?
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times
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occur. In my opinion, it is possible to make Linking Words
ideal
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an ideal
scoiety
, there are several ways to create Correct your spelling
society
ideal
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an ideal
society
including, Use synonyms
reduce
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reducing
gap
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the gap
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rich and poor Correct your spelling
between
people
, and Use synonyms
improve
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improving
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people
health.
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people's
To begin
with, I totally believe is possible to create Linking Words
ideal
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an ideal
the ideal
society
. To illustrate, Use synonyms
government
can build more social clubs in order to Add an article
the government
boosts
relationships among members of Change the verb
boost
society
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, these social clubs can contribute to Linking Words
bring
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bringing
people
together and Use synonyms
reduce
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reducing
the
conflicts among Correct article usage
apply
people
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the government can encourage Linking Words
people
to learn about their history via Use synonyms
visit
museums and art Wrong verb form
visiting
gallary
, which Correct your spelling
gallery
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this
can make Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
feel Use synonyms
of
a sense of Change preposition
apply
beloning
to their heritage and cultures. Correct your spelling
belonging
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, Linking Words
learn
about Wrong verb form
learning
histroy
boost a sense of identity Correct your spelling
history
among
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in
society
, which Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
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apply
create
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creates
ideal
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an ideal
society
result ofUse synonyms
unite
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unites
people
.
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Additionally
, I believe there are several factors Linking Words
contribute
to Correct pronoun usage
that contribute
creat
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create
perfect
community. The primary factor to Correct article usage
a perfect
creat
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create
ideal
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an ideal
society
is Use synonyms
reduce
the gap between wealth and poor Fix the infinitive
to reduce
people
. Use synonyms
For example
, affluent Linking Words
people
can donate money or clothes to poor Use synonyms
people
, which Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
can reduce the rate of poverty in Correct pronoun usage
apply
society
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, less poverty Linking Words
mean
less crime, which Change the verb form
means
make
our Change the verb form
makes
society
away from violence. Use synonyms
Enhance
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Enhancing
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people
health is another element to create Change noun form
people's
perfect
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a perfect
the perfect
society
. To Use synonyms
to
put Remove the redundancy
apply
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in
other words, the government could promote Correct pronoun usage
it in
healthy
lifestyle namely , playing Correct article usage
a healthy
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a sport
the sport
sport
, and Fix the agreement mistake
sports
eat
healthy food, which Wrong verb form
eating
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this
can reduce serious diseases Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as Linking Words
,
cancer, heart attack, Remove the comma
apply
obesity
in Correct word choice
and obesity
society
. Use synonyms
Thus
, less Linking Words
illnesess
in Correct your spelling
illnesses
illness
society
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mean
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means
healthy
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a healthy
society
, which Use synonyms
make
our Change the verb form
makes
society
ideal.
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To sum up
, I completely believe it is possible to make Linking Words
ideal
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an ideal
scoiety
through Correct your spelling
society
promote
, , there are different methods to create Replace the word
promotion
ideal
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an ideal
society
including, reduce Use synonyms
gap
Correct article usage
the gap
bweteen
affluent and poor Correct your spelling
between
people
, and Use synonyms
boosts
Wrong verb form
boosting
Change noun form
people's
people
health.Use synonyms
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