Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Whilst many people believe that the problem with the

environment

is

due to

species

of

plants

and

animals

getting extinct

while

others believe that there are much more extraordinary environmental

problems

. I agree with the latter opinion that there are bigger

problems

which need to be solved in order to preserve the

environment

. Environmental issues are the biggest threat to humankind

nevertheless

, the destruction has already happened and many

species

have suffered

due to

it.

This

has created a disbalance in the ecosystem as most

animals

and

plants

could not thrive in that

environment

,

this

initially

led to the starving of some exotic

animals

which are now extinct and probably future generations will read about it in history books.

For instance

, A particular breed of tortoise which has walked

this

planet Earth for more than 500 years has been confirmed by some scientists that they are on the verge of extinction and soon it will be followed by other

animals

because they are unable to sustain themselves in the present ecosystem.

Thus

, most individuals are seeking help to preserve

species

of

plants

and

animals

and are considering that

this

is the main problem.

Although

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, the primary issue

according to

other individuals is the pollution of different types which is been transmitted to the human body and leads to unknown health

problems

.

Furthermore

, there are other environmental concerns

such

as Mining, oceans getting polluted

due to

the slippage of oil by ships, Deforestation, and Air quality

is getting

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deteriorated

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deteriorating

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by

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because of

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combustion engines.

Additionally

, people

also

think that

this

will create even bigger detrimental

problems

which could even lead to humankind's extinction if not controlled correctly.

Therefore

, others believe in the preservation of what is been left and consider

this

a vital issue.

To conclude

, Some individuals think that

species

of

plants

and

animals

getting extinct are the main

problems

to the

environment

whereas

, I believe that there are other crucial issues which are still pending address and will have major impacts on the

environment

.