Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whilst many people believe that the problem with the

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species

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of

plants

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and

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getting extinct

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others believe that there are much more extraordinary environmental

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. I agree with the latter opinion that there are bigger

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which need to be solved in order to preserve the

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. Environmental issues are the biggest threat to humankind

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, the destruction has already happened and many

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have suffered

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it.

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has created a disbalance in the ecosystem as most

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and

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could not thrive in that

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initially

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led to the starving of some exotic

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which are now extinct and probably future generations will read about it in history books.

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, A particular breed of tortoise which has walked

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planet Earth for more than 500 years has been confirmed by some scientists that they are on the verge of extinction and soon it will be followed by other

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because they are unable to sustain themselves in the present ecosystem.

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, most individuals are seeking help to preserve

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of

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and

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and are considering that

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is the main problem.

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, the primary issue

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other individuals is the pollution of different types which is been transmitted to the human body and leads to unknown health

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.

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, there are other environmental concerns

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as Mining, oceans getting polluted

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the slippage of oil by ships, Deforestation, and Air quality

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combustion engines.

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, people

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think that

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will create even bigger detrimental

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which could even lead to humankind's extinction if not controlled correctly.

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, others believe in the preservation of what is been left and consider

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a vital issue.

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, Some individuals think that

species

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of

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and

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getting extinct are the main

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to the

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whereas

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, I believe that there are other crucial issues which are still pending address and will have major impacts on the

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