The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.
The first bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of services arriving on
time
of a
bus
company
which is divided into the actual
time
of the buses arriving and the target in terms of punctuality the
bus
company
tried to achieve. The second bar chart shows the
number
of
complaints
per thousand passenger journeys against the
bus
company
between 1999 and 2003.
Overall
, the
percentage
of services arriving on
time
as the target is almost always higher than the
percentage
of the actual punctuality of the
bus
company
. Only
at the end
of the period, did the
bus
company
outrace the target. The
number
of
complaints
rises and falls throughout the period. In both years 1999 and 2000, the targeted
percentage
of services arriving on
time
was 86,
while
the actual arrival rate was first 85% and in the following year 82%. The year 200 shows the biggest difference between the actual and the targeted performance of the
bus
company
in terms of punctuality. From 1999 to the year 2003 the
number
of
complaints
experienced a fluctuating increase.
While
in 1999 the
number
of
complaints
started at approximately 70 in 2003 almost 120
complaints
could be counted. Only in 2001, a minimal decline in
complaints
can be observed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, time, bus, company, number, complaints with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punctuality
  • target versus actual performance
  • correlation
  • consistency
  • trends
  • passenger numbers
  • complaints
  • assessment
  • measures taken
  • impact
  • effectiveness
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