The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the stages involved in
cheese
production in the factory until selling it
in the shops.
In order to make Correct pronoun usage
apply
cheese
, raw milk, and bacteria are processed in seven stages before being packed and sold in the shops. From an overall
perspective, it is evident that the production of cheese
takes almost more than two months.
The first stage of making cheese
involves raw milk, which undergoes the process of acidification. That means with the bacteria inside the raw mild and the process of acidification special enzymes are formed. Therefore
, the raw milk solidifies into curds in the second stage. In the next step, the curds are cut into small pieces and put into a pot where the product can be first heated and then
drained. In the fifth stage, salt can be added in order to form the product into a round shape. The last
step before the cheese
is ready to be packaged for the shop, the cheese
must be fermented for two months. With the final product, it can be shipped to the shops.Submitted by amal.allouch on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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