With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animals species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.Do they think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problems.

Nowadays,

due to

the rapid development of urbanisation, deforestation and illegal hunting, wild animal

species

is

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becoming endangered and some

species

are even close to

extinction

. I believe it is important to protect

near

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extinction

animals

. Policies and legal

enforcement

should be taken into

actions

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action

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. Extinct animal

protection

has always been part of environmental preservation. Extinct animal

protection

is crucial

due to

the fact that

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animals

also

protects ecological balance.

For example

, some birds are

pest eating

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birds. When those birds

are vanished

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in nature, the

pests

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pest's

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population will be dramatically raised and the crops would be destroyed. Without

food

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human

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will not

able

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to survive anyway.

This

is a severe chain reaction, that we should prevent and avoid.

Furthermore

,

animals

should be protected for educational

purpose

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for

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future generations to know the

species

around the world, and we could study and discover more from them.

Most

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important step is to bring plans into action.

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urbanisation progresses

human

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into

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another level.

However

,

protection

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the protection

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of extinct and endangered

species

can be

meet

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at the same time.

For

example

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government should introduce policies to enforce builders and developers to include natural landscapes

such

as parks in their building project application, which is an effective way to rebuild habitats for endangered

species

.

Hence

, it is mutually beneficial for the communities and for

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the environment

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environment

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protection

for

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species

.

In addition

, illegal hunting penalties should be applied and charged as criminal

such

as the act that

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offender to jail for at least 10 years. On the other hand, Law

enforcement

is more important than legal punishments, it is the frontline for animal

extinction

protection

. If

enforcement

department

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are unable to effectively enforce the law, the law

protection

would be meaningless. In conclusion, nowadays, many

animals

are rarely seemed

due to

the fact that they

loses

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their habitat

for

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city developments and expansions, the

destroy

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of natural forest and hunting illegally in rural areas. It is urgent and significant to proceed

action

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in animal

extinction

prevention with the

supports

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support

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of strict government regulations, policies and strong

enforcement

.