The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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given graph illustrates the changes that Linking Words
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happened in the costs of three dissimilar metals in 2014.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
price
of Nickel Use synonyms
exprienced
by far the most significant decrease among these three mentioned metals. Correct your spelling
experienced
While
the cost of Zinc relatively rose over Linking Words
this
period of time, the Linking Words
price
of Copper was almost identical.
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the figure Linking Words
that
related to Nickel, over the first half of the year, Correct pronoun usage
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this
figure Linking Words
exprienced
a downward trend Correct your spelling
experienced
about
9% .Afterwards, it increased to -1% and Change preposition
of about
remanied
steady until September Correct your spelling
remained
then
a new downward trend started but during the next month Linking Words
this
trend became reversed.
Moving into the changes that took place in Zinc and Copper costs, with Linking Words
exception
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the exception
some
fluctuations that they had over Change preposition
of some
this
1-year period, the ultimate change rate in the Linking Words
price
of Zinc slightly increased by 1% Use synonyms
whereas
the final change rate for Copper's cost was about -0.5% and the Linking Words
price
of Use synonyms
this
metal Linking Words
exprienced
an insignificant decrease during Correct your spelling
experienced
this
time frame.Linking Words
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