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Many people choose to learn many foreign languges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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people
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 to study many other
languages
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 because
people
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 who want value carry them. In
this
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Firstly
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, these days most
people
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 of the new generation like to visit their
country
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. they have to improve their new
language
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. As an example, if someone wanted to go to her
country
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 for a
job
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 she has to improve that
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's
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.
Secondly
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, if someone visits for a study who has to improve more than mostly English
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 and there is the
country
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's mother tongue. Students are very easy to catch at
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long
 age but someone who goes to the for the
job
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 who wanted to go meaning school improves their
language
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.
On the other hand
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, there are some
people
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 who wanted to learn a new
language
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 but can not touch
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her
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. As an example,
people
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 are running these days for money. But they do not have enough for that salary because of the reason they trying to visit for a
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 in another
country
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. They trying to learn a new
language
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 but it is not impossible to do that. because they have to do their
job
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 and improve in a new
language
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. In conclusion, in my opinion, day by day more new generations like to learn new
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 and that like to go to other
country
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 study or for a
job
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. because of the reasons learning new
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 have more prons.
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