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Many people choose to learn many foreign languges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Seiten individuals
people
 to study many other
languages
 because
people
 who want value carry them. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the pros and cons.
Firstly
, these days most
people
 of the new generation like to visit their
country
. they have to improve their new
language
. As an example, if someone wanted to go to her
country
 for a
job
 she has to improve that
country
's
language
.
Secondly
, if someone visits for a study who has to improve more than mostly English
language
 and there is the
country
's mother tongue. Students are very easy to catch at
her
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long
 age but someone who goes to the for the
job
 who wanted to go meaning school improves their
language
.
On the other hand
, there are some
people
 who wanted to learn a new
language
 but can not touch
at
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her
languages
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. As an example,
people
 are running these days for money. But they do not have enough for that salary because of the reason they trying to visit for a
job
 in another
country
. They trying to learn a new
language
 but it is not impossible to do that. because they have to do their
job
 and improve in a new
language
. In conclusion, in my opinion, day by day more new generations like to learn new
languages
 and that like to go to other
country
 study or for a
job
. because of the reasons learning new
languages
 have more prons.
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