The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for

 some building work.
The two maps provided depict the potential modifications that would transpire on the ground floor of a house.
Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the given diagrams, a profound metamorphosis is going to take place, especially in the central hall area.
Furthermore
, five major developments are likely to happen. Looking at the given maps in more detail, we can see that there is no plan to change the two entrance doors
as well as
the external walls. At the
center
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of the maps, the right internal wall is going to raze, allowing the living room to become larger,
while
the left internal wall will remain there with adding two internal doors to it in the south.
As well as
the changes mentioned above, the storage under the stairs is likely to dismantle,
as well as
the hall.
Moreover
, to the left of the kitchen, next to the external walls, kitchen furniture is going to add.
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