The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data provided in the form of pie charts illustrate how much
time
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was devoted to doing six different activities by adults in a certain nation over the 50 years from 1958 to 2008.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the pattern of working, staying at home, communicating and miscellaneous activities and exercising.
On the other hand
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, people had less
time
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to sleep, spending
time
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with their friends and relatives over the surveyed period. In 1958, people spent a third of their
time
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at the workplace,
while
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that
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increased significantly by almost 10% by 2008. The proportion of
time
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pupils staying in bed decreased from 32% to 25%.
Although
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the popularity of relaxing in the comfort of own home saw a 5% growth within a half of century.
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, citizens wasted more
time
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from work to home by 6% (from 2% to 8%). Despite a slight rise in
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time
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period to working out of 2%, spending
time
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with other people experienced a moderate decrease to under 10 % in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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