The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the manufacturing process of noodles.
Overall
, there are a total of 8 steps. In the first step
, flour is stored in huge buildings called silos. Similarly
, after passing through different stages, lastly
in stage 8 packaging is performed, from where it is sent for distribution.
Like mentioned above, firstly
the flour is stored in huge storage silos. Secondly
, the flour is mixed with water and oil, followed by converting it into sheets called Dough sheets, that is
the third step
. Whereas
, in the fourth step
, the sheets are turned into strips.
Later, in stage 5th noodles are separated into discs from
where it is cooked with oil and Change preposition
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then
kept for drying, which is the 6th step
. Stage 7th is the part where the noodles are added to cups and mixed with vegetables as well as
spices. Afterwards, in 8th
Correct article usage
the 8th
step
the cups are labeled
and at the same time Change the spelling
labelled
being
sealed.Unnecessary verb
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