The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features. You should write at least 150 words.

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The given table illustrates how many youngsters in far and urban

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four leisure time

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activities

( Reading, Animated play, Playing and Photography) over 2 decades period from 1990 to 2010.

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reading was the most popular

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for both Urban and Rural

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list for Urban area

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during 1990.

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individuals who

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in Animated play remained in constant numbers

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throughout

the period. It is

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that, in 1990 reading in urban places was the most popular

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people

and accounted for 61

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it saw a slight

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increase

around

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than fifth during 2010.

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, rural

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love reading were more than the

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urban

by 10% in 1990. and both rural and urban

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were equal in 2010.

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animated play started with 10

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and 18

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from urban and rural

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people

in far places decreased slightly around 4%.

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those in urban remained unchanged

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20 years.

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that, photography

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in 1990 was the least

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familiar

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for both

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

213 words

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