The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line diagram compares the proportion of the
population
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in the
Philippines
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,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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who lives in the cities over a period of 70 years.
It is clear that
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all four countries' city
population
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proportion was and will be growing from the years 1970 to 2040.
Malaysia
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's city
population
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percentage surpassed the
Philippines
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' percentage in 1990 and became the country with the highest city
population
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proportion among these four countries. In the year 1970, the
Philippines
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was in the leading position, with just over 30% of its national
population
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living in the cities, followed by
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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, with 30%, approximately 19%, and 14%, respectively. After almost two decades of having a lower percentage than
Malaysia
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, the
Philippines
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came back to the leading position with just under 50% in 1990.
However
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, a declining trend occurred soon after that year, going down almost 10%. One noticeable thing was that
Indonesia
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's figure took over
Thailand
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's and the
Philippines
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' in the years 2000 and 2010, respectively, and became the runner-up with just over 40% in 2010. Looking into the future, it is predicted that in 2020
Thailand
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will have a drastic rise in its figure,
while
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the other three countries will be having stable growths. In the year 2040,
Malaysia
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will have over 80% of its residents living in the cities. Meanwhile,
Indonesia
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, the
Philippines
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, and
Thailand
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will have approximately 60%, 50%, and 45%,
accordingly
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, philippines, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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