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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of working for large businesses?

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Individuals were more likely to join small
businesses
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 previously,
however
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, currently new generations prefer to work in large
companies
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 after their graduation. People who work in large
businesses
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 acquire a steady
finance
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 and social status but there will
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 be some drawbacks. In terms of
advantages
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the advantages
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 of working for large
businesses
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.
Firstly
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,
employees
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 have a more stable wage compared with small
companies
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.
Employees
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 do not have to worry about any unexpected situation causing wage problems, large
companies
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 have enough backgrounds to deal with various incidents.
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, working in well-known
companies
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,
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 as Google and Apple, represented their social status.
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, Google’s work benefit provides enormous entertainment and abundant salary, which lures plenty of graduations to join.
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, Google become a competitive company and each applicant who successfully required a job gets an intangible confidence that enhances their social status.
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, there are certain disadvantages that working for large
busineeses
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businesses
 brings. One of which is the working schedule that cannot be altered easily. As a company is large enough, the workers need to cooperate with each other, like meeting arrangements or the annual goals, which means that it is not easy for
employees
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 to take personal leave because it has the opportunity to affect
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others’ schedules. The other reason that working for large
businesses
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 would be
disadvantage
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 is because it is too competitive. Not only
employees
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 are striving for a higher position but
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 graduates
are compete
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are competing
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 for joining the company. Large
companies
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 are not expecting to train
eemployees
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employees
 but are looking for their sacrifice, in
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other words,
employees
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 who are not improving are possible to be replaced
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someday. In conclusion, there are both negative and
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positive
 effects of working for large
companies
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. New generations have an obligation to ensure that
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large
companies
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 keep
rrunning
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running
 because they are the keys to boosting domestic economic growth.

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