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The graph provides shows of female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph provides shows of female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
#unemployment #rates #country #kingdom
The chart below illustrates
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woman
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women
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unemployment
 rates in each state of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. We can see the fluctuations and different trends in the
rate
 of
woman
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women
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 who don’t have an occupation. The
most high
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rate
 of female
unemployment
 was in England,
by
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reaching 6,8
percent
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 in 2013
while
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Wales it was just 5,4
percent
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per cent
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. In 2014, In Scotland had
a
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little change
by
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increasing
for
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 6,7
percent
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, meantime in
the
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Northern Ireland’s
less
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rate
 consisted 4,6
percent
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. In general, in 2014,
the
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unemployment
 was
more
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less popular than in 2013. In 2013, fewer female
unemployment
 than
2014
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in 2014
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, in Scotland, by showing 6.1%. In 2014, the
rate
 of unemployed
woman
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women
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 in England had changed slightly, decreasing
for
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 6,5
percent
.
The female
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unemployment
 in Wales was
lowest
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, only 5,4
percent
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per cent
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 in comparison with other countries in 2013.
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,
unemployed
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the unemployed
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woman
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women
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 had a
less
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lower
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 proportion than
previous
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 year,
by
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demonstrating five
percent
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per cent
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 in Wales.
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