One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is banned private cars in certain city centers. It is undeniable that vehicles has become an essential part of our life.

One
of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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private
cars
in certain
city
centers
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. It is undeniable that vehicles
has
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become an essential part of our life.
However
, there is no absolute agreement as some
people
find
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of use of the
cars
beneficial,
while
others consider everything associated with prohibition
negatively
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. Surely, there are both pros and
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to
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vehicle
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but I believe
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outweigh
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.
One
of the main positives of
ban
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is that most
people
will use public transport frequently
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will reduce traffic jams on the road.
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,
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Hamburg
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which is banned
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of transport. The government offered
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by
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or
bicycles
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and allows pedestrian access through parks. Another advantage is that decreasing emissions coming from
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cars
. Emissions are little by little destroying our ozone layer, so
ban
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will cut down
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of
ozone
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layer. A good example here is Madrid that
forbidden
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petrol and diesel
cars
in the
city
centre, no
one
without
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of parking can not enter into
centre
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due to
"Ultra-low
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emissions zone" program. Turning to the other side of the argument, interdiction
cars
will slow down achieve to
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since
employee
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have to
figured
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out alternative
route
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.
In other words
,
the
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situation in Almaty, some roads are banned and citizens have to drive bypass
as a result
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traffic jams whole
city
. Another major
disadvantages
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is a cluster of
people
.
Therefore
, it might be
one
of the
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of epidemic and anxiety.
Such
as COVID-19
that is
begun in the
city
of China
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cluster of
people
and there
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will be in
the
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other cities and countries. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to
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conclusion that there are too many pros and
cos
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cons
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which
is
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can not satisfy citizens and after each prohibition followed by consequences which
is
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can improve or degrade the situation.
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