One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is banned private cars in certain city centers. It is undeniable that vehicles has become an essential part of our life.
One
of the widely discussed issues nowadays is banned
private Wrong verb form
banning
cars
in certain city
centers
. It is undeniable that vehicles Change the spelling
centres
has
become an essential part of our life. Change the verb form
have
However
, there is no absolute agreement as some people
find prohibition
of use of the Correct article usage
the prohibition
cars
beneficial, while
others consider everything associated with prohibition negatively
. Surely, there are both pros and Change the word
negative
cos
to Correct your spelling
cons
Add an article
the vehicle
vehicle
but I believe Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
advantages
outweigh Correct article usage
the advantages
disadvantages
.
Correct article usage
the disadvantages
One
of the main positives of ban
is that most Add an article
the ban
a ban
people
will use public transport frequently that
will reduce traffic jams on the road. Correct pronoun usage
which
For instance
, city
Correct article usage
the city
Hamburg
which is banned Change preposition
of Hamburg
usage
of transport. The government offered Add an article
the usage
moving
by Change the verb form
to move
walk
or Wrong verb form
walking
bicycles
and allows pedestrian access through parks. Another advantage is that decreasing emissions coming from Fix the agreement mistake
bicycle
the
Correct article usage
apply
cars
. Emissions are little by little destroying our ozone layer, so ban
will cut down Add an article
the ban
harm
of Correct article usage
the harm
ozone
layer. A good example here is Madrid that Correct article usage
the ozone
forbidden
petrol and diesel Wrong verb form
forbids
cars
in the city
centre, no one
without permissions
of parking can not enter into Fix the agreement mistake
permission
centre
Add an article
the centre
due to
"Ultra-low
emissions zone" program.
Turning to the other side of the argument, interdiction Correct article usage
the "Ultra-low
cars
will slow down achieve to work place
since Correct your spelling
workplace
employee
have to Fix the agreement mistake
employees
figured
out alternative Change the verb
figure
route
. Fix the agreement mistake
routes
In other words
, the
situation in Almaty, some roads are banned and citizens have to drive bypass Change preposition
in the
as a result
enormous
traffic jams whole Change preposition
of enormous
city
. Another major disadvantages
is a cluster of Change the noun form
disadvantage
people
. Therefore
, it might be one
of the factor
of epidemic and anxiety. Change to a plural noun
factors
Such
as COVID-19 that is
begun in the city
of China due to
huge
cluster of Correct article usage
a huge
people
and there is
will be in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
other cities and countries.
Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to Correct article usage
apply
a
conclusion that there are too many pros and Correct article usage
the
cos
which Correct your spelling
cons
is
can not satisfy citizens and after each prohibition followed by consequences which Unnecessary verb
apply
is
can improve or degrade the situation.Unnecessary verb
apply
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