The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014
The line graph describes information on a variety of jams sold between 2009 and 2014.
Overall
, all jams except the plum variety showed rising trends during the 5-year period.
Looking at the chart, Strawberry Jam had the biggest market in 2009 at just over 3 units
. From there, these sales sale
progressively increased, which eventually more than doubled in 2014. Furthermore
, although
Grape Jam had the lowest sale
in 2009, the sale
was constantly rising and reaching their peak in 2014 at around 4.5 units
.
Meanwhile, Raspberry and Cherry showed some fluctuations. First,
Raspberry had a slight increase in demand from 2 to around 3.5 items in 2011, which was followed by a significant rise in 2012 to just above 5 items. However
, this
number began to slow down and had its biggest point in 2014, at around 4.5 units
in 2014. Interestingly, the Cherry jam market fluctuated throughout the years. It started with just below 2 units
in 2009, which went up in 2010 before declining to its lowest number in 2011. From there, it reached its peak at 3 before slowly declining in 2014. Lastly
, in contrast
to others, the plum sale
steadily dropped from start to finish, from approximately 2.5 in 2009 to 0 in 2014.Submitted by meliarizkina86 on
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