The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016

The line chart illustrates the

amount

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of ill people, who visited different clinics per

one

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week between 2010 and 2016 Looking from the

overall

perspective, it is readily apparent that diabetic and eye problems were steadily increasing almost during the whole period,

while

the average number of dental and gynaecology

patients

experienced considerable changes. With regards to

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ophthalmology

patients

, their number witnessed the most significant raise, beginning at approximately 130 in 2010, slightly increasing to 150 in 2012, and

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jump in 350 individuals weekly in 2016.

In addition

, in 2016 there were three times more people with diabetes compared with 2010. In 2010 around 100

patients

visited a dental clinic in one week, but in 2012 only 50 people were treated in a hospital.

However

, the line was steadily inclining during

next

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two years,

reached

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nearly 130 individuals and plateauing till 2016.

Moreover

, birth control was the main reason to go to the hospital in 2010 but in 2016 eye problems became a leader (almost 250 and 350

patients

respectively).