The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of ill people, who visited different clinics per Change the quantifier
number
one
week between 2010 and 2016
Looking from the Correct pronoun usage
apply
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that diabetic and eye problems were steadily increasing almost during the whole period, while
the average number of dental and gynaecology patients
experienced considerable changes.
With regards to the
ophthalmology Correct article usage
apply
patients
, their number witnessed the most significant raise, beginning at approximately 130 in 2010, slightly increasing to 150 in 2012, and sudden
jump in 350 individuals weekly in 2016. Correct article usage
a sudden
In addition
, in 2016 there were three times more people with diabetes compared with 2010.
In 2010 around 100 patients
visited a dental clinic in one week, but in 2012 only 50 people were treated in a hospital. However
, the line was steadily inclining during next
two years, Correct article usage
the next
reached
nearly 130 individuals and plateauing till 2016. Wrong verb form
reaching
Moreover
, birth control was the main reason to go to the hospital in 2010 but in 2016 eye problems became a leader (almost 250 and 350 patients
respectively).Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words patients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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