Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time read the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a point of debate that spending time
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receiving
news
by reading newsprint or watching programmes is wasteful because
news
unlinks people’s lives. Though I completely reject
this
notion and the upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments,
as well as
lead to
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conclusion. The first and foremost evidence for
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the influence
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of
news
on
life
is that residents can use the updated information to improve their lives.
In other words
, by accessing and understanding
news
effectively, dwellers can catch up with trends,
therefore
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risks
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, health and so on. When the Covid 2019 pandemic broke out worldwide,
for instance
, each
individuals
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had to update
news
regularly to take measures to protect themselves.
Besides
, both employees and business owners have to access reports on some social networking sites about economic, political or weather situations.
Consequently
, it is obvious that receiving information
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either
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or advanced technology
such
as social media is actually necessary to
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.
Secondly
, updating reports regularly not only improves
life
quality but
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also
boosts
knowledge
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of residents. Undoubtedly,
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network is a stock of available information that everyone can easily access and study.
Thus
, the more time you spend on
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learning
data, the more knowledge you gain.
Moreover
, by studying global
news
, dwellers can become more modern, civilized and scholarly.
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such
reasons, not only adults but
also
youngsters can become
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modernised owing to awareness of broadcast. In conclusion, it is true that
news
has
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connection with
life
,
thus
spending daily time
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reading newsprint or watching social media is especially essential.
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