The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given diagrams compare the differences between the current and proposed design for a civic centre.
Overall
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, significant alterations will be made in terms of the location of several buildings. It is
also
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noticeable that there will be a plan to construct a system of
hotel
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and
restaurant
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and a local cafe in the area. Looking at the details, two public parking facilities located at the northwest and northeast corner of the centre will be demolished, making room for a brand new cafe and a system of hotel and dining
eatery
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respectively. A new car park,
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, will be established underneath the town hall, which will maintain its existing location in the southeast. At a closer look, the current exhibition adjacent to High Street is intended to be relocated
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the lower corner of Smith Street, replacing the present local library. The library,
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, will experience an upgrade into a larger, underground version situated
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existing council offices.
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, The office building
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authorities will be moved to the left corner of Victoria Avenue soon. Notably, the movie theatre will be the only building which remains unchanged,
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the shopping centre, in the area in time to come
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic centre
  • Present
  • Plan
  • Comparison
  • Main features
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Information
  • Report
  • Relevant
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