The diagram shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The diagram illustrates the process of production and preparation of
coffee
for sale in retail marketplaces.
Overall
,
this
is a process with 11 steps from the harvest of
coffee
beans to the packaging into jars followed by the processing with different temperatures. At
first,
coffee
beans are collected carefully by hand before being dried on the field and roasted in the machine. After that, the roasted
coffee
is put in a container with a sudden temperature drop, and
then
it is transferred to the grinding machine to become
coffee
powder before being soaked in hot water. To separate the
coffee
with water, the hot
coffee
mixture goes through the strain. After the
coffee
separation, the mixture is kept for grinding which is done subsequent to the freezing process.
Finally
, the vacuum is used to dry the
coffee
power collected from the previous stage prior to being packed in jars and delivered to supermarkets and shops for sale.
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