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Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #team #sports #children #work #life
The public believes that group
business
 (football, basketball, etc)
create
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creates
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 kids to get ready when
go
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going
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 to work.
On the other hand
, communities say that individual
sport
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sports
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 (race, chess, etc) can make them better. There are a number of aspects, if people argue about
this
 topic. Individuals should trust each other when playing as a team.
This
 condition will make good chemistry among the players so they can reach the goal together. Work-life do the same rule. If we have good interaction with our friends in the office, we can solve the problem together. The main point of reaching our aim is not only interaction but
also
 behaviour. Without good intentions and behaviour, we cannot create better relationships with our colleagues, unless we are smart. Another aspect is individual
business
. Individual play can make a stronger body and mind. Sometimes, it will train your focus when you do something, not only in play but
also
 work-life. Focus is the main factor
while
 you do some jobs in the office. You have to concentrate on creating or thinking about great ideas. If we are not focusing on our tasks, we cannot get what we planned before. I think both conditions give us a deeper perspective to choose. If we want to create chemistry or relationships with our friends in the office, we can choose team
business
 as preparation for our children.
on the contrary
, individual
business
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 will train children’s focus when doing something. It depends on parents what they want for preparing their kids to get ready for work-life.
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