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Some people believe that Professionals such as doctor and engineers . Should be required to work in the Country where's they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

#people #professionals #doctor #engineers #work #country
There are competing views about where professionals
allowed
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 to
work
.
While
 some believe that they should
work
 in the same
country
 where they did their training, others think that they should be allowed to
work
 anywhere they want. In
this
 essay, I am going to address both views and give my own. On the one hand, those who argue that the
countries
 where people did their training
determines
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 where they are allowed to
work
, believe that field training is considered crucial to bridge education to the market. Take
for example
 civil engineering as a professional
career
, all students around the world take nearly identical courses
at
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 their undergraduate education, but what differs is the field training, where they learn how to implement their knowledge to a specific market.
Conversely
, advocates of freedom call to not limit people
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specific
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country
 for the rest of their lives just because they did their training in that
country
. They believe that everyone should be able to choose the
country
 where they want to develop their professional
career
, as they have the needed knowledge and it
crucial
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 for them to feel comfortable to do their best. In my opinion, being in a place where one feels comfortable is a key element for success.
However
, governments should have
the
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control over
whom
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 is allowed to
work
 in their
countries
, and if needed
to
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exclude graduates from
countries
 where that do not meet their minimum standards of education. In conclusion, the question of whether professionals should be allowed to
work
 in
countries
 other than the one where they received their training is debatable. Some argue that because field training is about
specific
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the specific
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 market, they cannot start a professional
career
 in other markets. Others believe that if individuals are forced to
work
 in the same
country
, they will not be successful in their
career
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. In my opinion, there should be a space for people to choose where they believe they can build their
career
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 but at the same time, governments should have
the
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control over who is suitable to
work
 in their
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skill shortage
  • Career mobility
  • Global workforce
  • Economic impact
  • Training investment
  • Professional freedom
  • Job satisfaction
  • Career goals
  • Skill transfer
  • Global standards
  • Innovation
  • Knowledge sharing
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