Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nations are becoming increasingly identical
due to
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individuals
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able to purchase the same
goods
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anywhere in the world. I totally believe
this
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is a positive trend because it will contribute to
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gap
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the gap
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between rich and poor
people
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,
make
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price
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the price
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of
products
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affordable , and
make
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people
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live more
convenient
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with, there are several reasons why I believe if countries are becoming similar regarding
goods
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is a positive trend .
Firstly
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,
this
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trend will contribute to
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the
gap
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between wealthy and poor
people
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.
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is because
poor
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the poor
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will
able
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be able
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to buy
same
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the same
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products
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of
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wealth
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people
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.
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, less
gap
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between affluent and poor
people
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mean
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less crime rate worldwide.
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,
people
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from different cultures and backgrounds will able to buy similar
goods
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, which
mean
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means
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less cultural difference among nations.
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,
less
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fewer
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cultural
difference
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differences
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mean
less
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conflicts among
people
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.
Secondly
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, if all stores sell the same
products
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the competition only will become in the price of
goods
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, which
mean
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means
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every
stroe
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store
will compete to provide inexpensive
goods
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for
people
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.
Consequently
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,
people
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will
able
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be able
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to save a considerable
amont
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amount
of money result of buying less expensive
products
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, if the all
stroes
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stores
sell the same
goods
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this
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can make
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people
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people's
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life more comfortable. To illustrate,
people
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will
do
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not need to travel overseas in order to buy certain
products
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, which
mean
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people
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will save time and effort.
To sum up
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, I strongly think
this
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a positive development on the grounds that
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gap
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the gap
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bewteen
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between
affluent and poor
people
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will reduce,
price
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the price
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of
goods
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will become cheaper, and it enhance
availability
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the availability
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of
goods
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for
people
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