The map presents us the modify of seaside resort Templeton that happened period between 1990 and 2005.

The map presents us the modify of seaside resort Templeton that happened period between 1990 and 2005.
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The map illustrates the layouts of Templeton which is a resort situated beside the sea in 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, the addition of an airport, and the railway line running along the seashore by the ferry made the resort more accessible
while
the supermarket and the factory increased the functionality. To the North, surrounding the lake, tall buildings have replaced the mansion and the trees. Between the two roads leading to the school and the railway station, a row of villas have been constructed in the place of the greenery. In the South, near the rail line, closer to the seaside, a supermarket, a road and two new skyscrapers have been built. To the East of the estuary, a factory took the place of two houses.
Additionally
, the rail track connects the new ferry on the South-Eastern region by the shore to the station.
Furthermore
, the North-Eastern side house the airport and the residential area, previously occupied by vegetation.
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