The chart shows the change in forested land in different regions of the world over time.
The graph illustrates the comparison by gender and
regions
, of world Fix the agreement mistake
region
illiteracy
in the last
year.
Overall
, female illiteracy
rates
are higher than male in all the regions presented in the Bar Chart. It is also
noticeable that the region with the highest rates
are
in South Change the verb form
is
Asia
.
First of all, male rates
are always lower in this
graph. In the develop
countries is close to 0%. Change the form of the verb
developed
While
in South Asia
this
rate is around 35 %. In East Asia
is close to 10%
By
the other hand, we could Change preposition
On
se
that Correct your spelling
see
woman
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woman's
rates
are higher in the Arab states, South Asia
, and Sub Saharan
Africa. In Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
this
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country
countries
female Add a comma
,countries
illiteracy
was around 50%. In East Asia
, female rates
are around 20%
Its
is noticeable the difference between Correct pronoun usage
It
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
. In Latin American countries the difference Fix the agreement mistake
females
of
female and male Change preposition
between
illiteracy
its
not that big, both of them are close to 10% of the population.Correct your spelling
is
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