The chart shows the change in forested land in different regions of the world over time.

The chart shows the change in forested land in different regions of the world over time.
The graph illustrates the comparison by gender and
regions
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region
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, of world
illiteracy
in the
last
year.
Overall
, female
illiteracy
rates
are higher than male in all the regions presented in the Bar Chart. It is
also
noticeable that the region with the highest
rates
are
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in South
Asia
. First of all, male
rates
are always lower in
this
graph. In the
develop
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countries is close to 0%.
While
in South
Asia
this
rate is around 35 %. In East
Asia
is close to 10%
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the other hand, we could
se
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see
that
woman
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rates
are higher in the Arab states, South
Asia
, and
Sub Saharan
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Africa. In
this
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country
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countries
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female
illiteracy
was around 50%. In East
Asia
, female
rates
are around 20%
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is noticeable the difference between
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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. In Latin American countries the difference
of
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female and male
illiteracy
its
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not that big, both of them are close to 10% of the population.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • reforestation
  • sustainable practices
  • conservation policies
  • biodiversity
  • socioeconomic factors
  • agricultural expansion
  • logging
  • urban development
  • global impact
  • climate change
  • forest management
  • baseline comparison
  • environmental influences
  • political influences
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