The chart shows the change in forested land in different regions of the world over time.

The graph illustrates the comparison by gender and

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, of world

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year.

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, female

illiteracy

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rates

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are higher than male in all the regions presented in the Bar Chart. It is

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noticeable that the region with the highest

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in South

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. First of all, male

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are always lower in

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countries is close to 0%.

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in South

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rate is around 35 %. In East

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is close to 10%

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the other hand, we could

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rates

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are higher in the Arab states, South

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, and

Sub Saharan

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Africa. In

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female

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was around 50%. In East

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, female

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are around 20%

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is noticeable the difference between

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males

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and

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females

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. In Latin American countries the difference

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female and male

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not that big, both of them are close to 10% of the population.